Madame, Mistress and Maid ~Mille-Feuille ~ Page 8
This page slightly reminds me of the how lesbians kiss ( With tongues apparently https://www.discordcomics.com/minoritymonsters/20-gondul-the-gay-valkyrie/)
I hope Jane’s personality comes across in this page- I know we’re smutty but we’re also getting to know them!
I’m trying holding my pen a different way and experimenting with line weight. Shading I still haven’t quite settled on a style yet so please bear with me while I figure that one out.
forgive the perplexed reaction but, why is she shoving her fingers in her mouth like that in that first panel?
it’s really uncomfortable/weird looking.
(me: a practicing lesbian, but not exactly widely versed ^,^)
Some people are into it. I think it looks uncomfortable too, but its not uncommon.
ok.. i was getting this weird “mean girl” vibe… (probably dated one too many myself ^,^)
Oki :) back into the right mental frame :) Thank you for the clearup.
They are covered in juices from what I can tell and they are both licking them clean. Angle and perception make them look odd, but the tongues being positioned how they are leads me to believe they are merely cleaning up afterwards.
I find this quite disgusting (the soaked faces I mean) , for myself, but I understand if other people like this. Im an heterosexual woman, so I tend to find man more attractive in almost any situation. Sometimes, I find woman appealing as well, but not in this particular story. I dont know why but I just dont feel confortable with the way this characters are being visually represented: I like the story, I find the characters personalities (so far) very interesting and unique (although sir, buttler and boy is similar, the story is not a copy paste but a new fresh one) but the way this three characters are being drawn is not on my taste. Dont know why, cause I have read Tab’s other stories and I always found them very well drawn and stetic. Just my personal opinion and sorry for any gramatycal mistake, english is not my mother tongue.
I like how flushed and sloppy they are. It’s the kind of face that would never be shown in artificial glamour shots, it makes the whole scene more intimate to me and quite shameless. It helps to show how long they’ve been going at it – longer than it took us to read these pages, I mean. And it makes me imagine that the windows are now steamy.
Wow, I really like how sloppy they are, you don’t see it very often in comics, but really sometimes it is what happens when you eat someone out, and there were two heads down there, it would make a mess. I like how impatient Jane is, she just wants some of Jacqueline and Madame is having none of it. Love it.