Sir, Butler and Boy ~ A Tailored Fit ~ Page 5
Sorry for the delay- I forgot to upload this page before leaving for kitacon! Now to go crawl into bed for a week because kita broke me #KitaSecretKitaSafe
I hope it’s clear here that Sir is marking delicious pain favours into the soft flesh of the Butler’s right thigh. The more I wrote the word ‘Pinch’ the less it looked spelled correctly.
i did get a little lost at that last panel. thought he was pinching his adams apple.
reading the description helped there :)
and otherwise…ow-yum :-D
Words in english are weird enough, add dyslexia to it and I find myself double spell-checking and asking people if perfectly ordinary words are spelled right because they look wronger the more you write them. Like “twelfth”, how is that even a word?
i feel the same way about awkward… (yep, spellchecker likes that version) :-P
Then add in American versus Canadian spelling, and you’ll understand my own personal dyslexia hell.
Haha yeah. It’s like when you say a word out loud enough times, it loses its meaning. :p Anyway, wonderful page! This calls for several re-reads.
Oh my god, their faces on the third panel. A-ma-zing. Without showing explicit stuff, this webcomic manages to be sexy as hell!
And as a non-native speaker of English, most words sounded super weird at first for me. I had to double check several times to make sure people weren’t making fun of me when they told me I spelled certain words wrong!
I suddenly realized something. All these pages would have even more impact if we got to see them in their natural roles once. I’d really like to see Jefferson actually being John’s boss, in a brief scene. Like when John says in an earlier page that he thinks the butler gets an extra kick from knowing he’s of such lower position, and does this to him. We know it, but we haven’t seen it. Seeing Jefferson in his actual boss mode would’ve been great for comparison, and extra kicks from pages like this. :)
Or seeing Jefferson have to punish John in a professional capacity…
Very much so, yes indeed.
Same goes for James. So far, the closest we’ve gotten is him trying to pull rank in his quest to join and in Morning Ablutions. I’d like to see James acting in his capacity as their employer–having to pull rank on them in their mundane (as opposted to sexual) roles–and the aftermath of that event in their play.
I had always hoped that Downton Abbey would evolve into this somehow! Thank you for fulfilling THAT fantasy.